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talking about so pretended I did.
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'
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'About 2years.
You.
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Since I was
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Mind if I?' she asked.
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She tapped three
times on the
keypad then
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else.
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'Wrong
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with it
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'It's a
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tapped again.
'What?' I asked.
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shook her
head.
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for that matter.
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'What? Why?' 'Because it makes the writing
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It was intentionally tasteless!' she said.
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You've
used it twenty times already and she's only just
got her coat off,' she said.
'But.
' '
Get a thesaurus.
Look
words up and use more interesting
alternatives.
And ellipses
only have three dots, though you
can add a
fourth as a full-stop if you like.
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